If I only could [V.1] (9) +1

Not satisfied with this. Currently mulling over how to do it better. I'm open to suggestions from those who read and watch the stuff below.

I wanted to do a shot inspired by Kate Bush's song "Running Up That Hill":

Video: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xl6ls_kate-bush-running-up-that-hill_music
Live performance (I prefer the sound of this one): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vl9OKddQBRg

"It doesn't hurt me
You want to feel how it feels?
You want to know, know that it doesn't hurt me?
You want to hear about the deal I'm making?
You ... it's you and me ...

If I only could
I'd make a deal with God
And get him to swap our places
I'd be running up that road
Running up that hill
With no problems ..."